Thứ Tư, 21 tháng 4, 2010

Living alone

Living alone
“Marriage is the ending of love”. There is a great deal of eternal love which is stopped by conflict of couple life. Therefore, the number of people who live alone are increasing. This style is more popular in modern society. For me, living alone is the best choice to keep myself peaceful and free forever.
Getting married means quitting freedom. There is not any stoppage that disturbs me from doing what I like if I do not get married. I can be very pleased with my finance. I will go shopping every weekend with my mom or sister and pick up anything I want. On holidays, I would like to travel to strange lands and expand my knowledge. In job, I have opputinities to promote than other people because I am willing to go far mission and work under pressure. Furthermore, I definitely my role as a good kids in family. I want to compensate to my parents for all things they did by buying all health food for them. On the contracy, many wives spend all their time and money taking care of their family. They rarely join in any activity. Therefore, freedom is the best choice.
In addition. My spiritual will be enriched if I stay alone. I can not stand if someone afford me to give up my creature comfort. I like to read funny books till midnight, stir myself in warm bath or even stay in bed longer. Sometimes, gathering with friends is good way to consolidate long lasting friendship. Perhaps, I can come out of my shell and participate in some dacing cook or yoga class to keep my health fit. It is no matter if I go out late to theater. One impotant thing that many people realize after getting married, their partner is not good as they expected. Love makes us blind as a bat so they can not see badpoints of another half.
However, a lot my friends say that: “ after getting high position, what will I have? There are just loneness and jealousness with otherswho have family”. Perhaps, if I stay lonely in the end of lifetime, I will be upset. I can adopt a baby and give it all my love. Becoming a single mom is not strange. I have my by to share sadness and happiness.i am not lonely any more. Actually, my parents disagree with my intention. They are afraid of rumour of neighbour. I have comforted them already. I will live with all standard of good human. Rumour is not the problem anymore.
How can we be in future depend on our plant. Just try to keep our mind clear and always do the best thing.

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  1. I can not stand if someone afford me to give up my creature comfort??????

    In addition. My spiritual will be enriched if I stay alone. I can not stand if someone afford me to give up my creature comfort. I like to read funny books till midnight, stir myself in warm bath or even stay in bed longer. Sometimes, gathering with friends is good way to consolidate long lasting friendship. Perhaps, I can come out of my shell and participate in some dacing cook or yoga class to keep my health fit. It is no matter if I go out late to theater. One impotant thing that many people realize after getting married, their partner is not good as they expected. Love makes us blind as a bat so they can not see badpoints of another half.
    IN WHAT WAY YOUR SPIRITUAL LIFE IS ENRICHED? WHAT ABOUT THE MARRIED WOMEN?

    AGAIN, YOUR CONCLUSION IS TOO SIMPLE TO GET MARKS.

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