Thứ Hai, 12 tháng 4, 2010

Buses are becoming popular in our modern life
“Let’s bus” is a very familiar slogan that can be easily found on the street. Using this public transportation is a part of my life. The advantages of bus are confirmed by plenty of people. Three major factors cause using bus widens to every corner of street are convenience, the big community and safe for environment.
This kind of transportation brings back benefit than any other one. We can save money because we just pay a little change for ticket. Nowadays, the price of petrol is increasing by time, and the store of natural energy is running out. We need to choose the best thing that helps our alternative. Using bus we can also avoid the polluted air. Joining cool, fresh air and listening to favorite music are good way to relax in rest time on bus. However, some people say that” bus is only for person who do not own a private motorbike, bus is crowded, hot and rude”. Those things are not wrong but they are just small side of bus. In rush hour, the bus drivers try to pick all customers up to the buses because they will be late for work unless they reach the bus. That makes the bus nearly breathless. Why can we meet in halfway? That means we just share some spaces to another and no one is late. The more number of people use the bus, the less accident and traffic jam happen.
The busy work makes people exhausted and they have no time to get friend or communicate to each other. In rest time on bus, we can talk to people around. It is fun if we find persons who are really sympathy and helpful. In some cases, we feel warm when someone else makes room for children, old or disable persons. “Buses are also the place for pick pocket, cheater who tries to sell false things like: watches, books, medicine…” some people say that. bus is public plac

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